A beautiful Sunday, like most, was warm with joyous sunshine. However, as the day continued, the once
lazy and hanging clouds became very transitory. Within hours, a storm left behind profound devastation from
the imperious windstorm. The novel
morning, with its calm beauty, was soon to be forgotten.
The
timorous storm continued to gather strength hour after hour. For a time, the tall tress stood stoic,
however that was not to last long. It seemed without warning; the winds blew with gratuitous force and the
trees bent to 90-degree angles, as if they were being pulled but young children
from every direction. Leaves were pervasive,
with sights set on every horizon. They blew about with no destination in hand. Even the birds were at the mercy of the wild wind. Some tried to fly against the strong
force, others were left to tumble towards the ground. This strong wind was no match for anything in its way.
The aesthetic appearance of the sun
set behind the trees was certainly not prosaic. The glowing red and orange sunset was spectacular beyond
measure. While, at the opposite
end of the spectrum, and the full moon was beyond beautiful, with its pure
white elegant shine. This put a
weary mood into effect.
After the storm struck, the debris
was laying on the ground in every residents yard, and put three thousand houses
in darkness. Paramount in
the thoughts of everyone in the county must surely have been safety. As it turned out, much damage was done,
however, the situation could have been much worse.
Ike, with all of his might and
strength, certainly left a lasting impression on all those he met. He will implant memories that will
never be forgotten. Speaking on behalf of everyone Ike met, “Goodbye and don’t
come back!”
I envy your talent with description and your wonderful vocabulary. You were really able to paint a picture in my head of the situation with outstanding imagery. I really enjoyed your personification.
ReplyDeleteThis is cool. What did you write it for? Have you thought about taking a creative writing class?
ReplyDeleteI think you have a great sense of language and I agree with Alexa that the descriptions are lovely. I'd keep working on this kind of stuff. If you want you could even continue the story (if you think of it as a story) in the next post.