“Let’s go!” as my friend Zak said
when talking about going to visit an old, run down, haunted sawmill that was
located in his neighborhood. My
friends and I agreed with him and decided to go. On the way he told us the story that he heard about this
house, and everyone kind of didn’t really listen to him, and though that he was
just making it up.
As we were walking I actually started to believe
him. All of a sudden it hit me, I saw the house, and it was creepy as he said
it was. He sure wasn’t
lying. We slowly crept towards the
house and there were vacant old cars sitting outside the house. We then went inside as a group of seven
of us. The house’s wooden floors
creaked every time you took a step. The air was musty and old, but the smell was very distinct, old saw
dust. We then went on trying to
figure out if the story that Zak told us was true.
Then while walking out of the house everyone was
ragging on Zak for the story and how ghosts lived there. We didn’t see anything that made Zak’s
story true, except for the house and the vacant cars. Then, Brian, the main person that was making fun of Zak,
turns and screams, “Run!” All of
us sprinted faster than we all could ever imagine, we didn’t even know why we were
even running. While dodging
branches, thorns, and logs, everyone’s mind was racing with thoughts. What did he see? What happened? Is it chasing us? Was there really
something there or is he playing a joke on us? We then finally came to a familiar road, after what seemed
like hours were only a few minuets. We all stopped. While
panting like dogs we asked Brian, “What happened?” As he explained in short phrases, still being out of breath
and scared Brian said that he saw a that one of the cars was steamed up, so he
looked harder and saw girl in the window, and it wasn’t a girl that he has ever
seen before.